Tuesday, May 6, 2014

White Dots Comments

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Reappearing the white dots on my fingernail
I’m growing a child again I yell
She smiles having by now known it well
It’s where I dwell.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 06 May 2014

Very compelling write which held my interest throughout. I enjoyed the easy flow of the material. Excellent work.

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