White Crayon Comments

Jaya, this is a great poem. It is a reminder of how we should acknowledge those who are important. Too often, however, I suspect the person in question has gone and the opportunity evaporates. Again, a wonderful poem.

Brilliant poem how cleverly written my dear friend and what a smashing ending...that's what poetry is about conveying a message with that awesome subtley that you portrayed in this poem. I hope many read this and I love the poet note it's wise words :)

Hi Jaya, A very poignant poem; a little philosophical.100+++