Wednesday, February 20, 2013

White Cloud Comments

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The story of the black cloud is a tragedy full of sadness
The same story of the people's judge about the appearance
So, our cloud decided to disappear it's self to see the bless
But before that, it created a white cloud, a cloud for the birds and hens
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Ellias Anderson Jr.
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Kelvin Owusu 25 February 2013

this is an amazing piece of poetry we are unable to kill our pride but perhaps learn to put our pride aside

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Unwritten Soul 20 February 2013

I just love it and the intro was superb, you know the rain....Rain is always my fav thing hahahaha...Love in a raindrops will shed your fears..i just said this to only my dear friends..._Soul

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

Ellias Anderson Jr.

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