Sunday, December 8, 2019

White Christmas Comments

Rating: 4.7

Large, fluffy snowflakes
Drip rapidly down my head
White Christmas is here.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Shaun Cronick 09 November 2020

A most beautiful haiku Rose Marie and refreshingly written. After reading it I feel like a kid again and can't wait for Christmas and if it snows that is the seasonal icing on the cake or landscape. So rare to have a white Christmas. So I'll keep my fingers crossed for you and everyone. Five artic white stars and thank you. Take care and if it's not too early Merry Christmas and a HO! HO! HO! .

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Harindhar Reddy 16 May 2020

I think poems runs with hidden cannotation that many good things happen on the festive day or may be in that part of world snowflakes fall. Another wonderful haiku by the poet....

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 December 2019

We have here no white Christmas at most places, but if you close your eyes upon reading this Haiku, it does appear before eyes, well done dear poet, the Day is just day away, and let me wish you a Merry Christmas.

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Shaun Cronick 19 December 2019

Wonderful! It feels like Christmas already. So simple and neat lovingly written. Thank you Rose Marie for writing and sharing this captivating gem.10++ and added to my deep freeze vault so it doesn't melt away. Thanks s again Rose Marie. Take care.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 December 2019

White symbolises purity. May the white light of wisdom prevail. Beautiful.......10

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Chinedu Dike 12 December 2019

A beautiful haiku written to commemorate the Xmas season. A lovely creation. Remain enriched, my friend.

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Mihaela Pirjol 12 December 2019

The iconic image of Christmas beautifully arranged in words and pouring like the snowflakes!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2019

This loveliest poem goes straight to MyPoemList! A 10 Full Score and much much more for this Wonderful White Christmas. God's Blessings in Abundance be upon thee together with your beloved family. Amen.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2019

A most beautiful haiku 5-7-5 format about White Christmas, Amidst the Advent weeks you have created this most beautiful landscape of a white Christmas with the most beautiful atmospheric words, inspired by large fluffy snowflakes on your head Your words are truly fascinating imaginable and such a dreamy White Wonderland We have snow and snowflakes in the Netherlands, but rarely a truly white Christmas, the Netherlands is just too low geographically

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Akhtar Jawad 11 December 2019

Hairs turning white and reminding the end of life just as snow of December reminds the end of the year. May God bless you with a happy and healthy long life. We all see this white Christmas. But it's too early to greet a Christmas.

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Sandra Feldman 09 December 2019

We can really feel the snow! And your Xmas happiness, too. Lovely just lovely, Rose.

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Anjandev Roy 09 December 2019

Meaningful and outstanding. Thank u.anjanfev roy.

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 December 2019

Large, fluffy snowflakes Drip rapidly down my head White Christmas is here. short, meaningful and so fine a poem. tony

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 December 2019

I just capture the magnificent scene where your head is being rapidly showered by fluffy snowflakes! You have been a blessed person there with such a grand dream at the advent of Christmas! You have chosen a befitting title. A beautiful poem……………Full marks!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

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