Tuesday, November 13, 2007

White Against White Comments

Rating: 5.0

A polar bear treads warily across the ice,
In search of food.
Anything that he can acquire, would well suffice,
If something’s viewed.
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Ernestine Northover
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R H 03 May 2008

I could feel the cold from here - you have captured the stark beauty of nature here Ernestine - 'ice, suffice, isolated' all words that echo the 'ice' sound and reinforce the white against white landscape you have painted with your words. Beautifully crafted - the language is chillingly accurate. j xx

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Ernestine, as Always I am impressed by your vision of things! I love the white against white imagery...truly the polar is beauty personified...in a peace filled way especially in its own habitat amongst the snow and the ice. I love this one.......thanx for sharing and Take care of U, Shelley

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Melvina Germain 25 March 2008

Ernestine your imagry is fantastic here, the reader can clearly see what is going on. I can almost see a tear in the eye of the polar beer, needing to find that food. A truly lovely write Ernestine. Melvina

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Lynda Robson 13 November 2007

This is really lovely Ernestine, you have a way of describing things so that the reader can imagine every detail, I echo Tara's words, love Lynda xxx

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This is SO well-depicted... I feel like I have a David Attenborough picture on my screen... brilliant. t x

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