Monday, July 27, 2009

Whispers Of Winter? Comments

Rating: 4.3

Windfalls appearing as each cooler breeze,
Snapping at leaves, releases them forcibly.
Morning-mist windows give hints from the east
Of winter's first whisper, which nature endorses.
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Whispers of Winter is such an enticing title, even though I would feel cold reading it. I loved 'bulging of berry red, harvest tall vines' and the rhyming couplet at the end is splendid. 10 Karin Anderson

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Tango 27 July 2009

Its a crazy world, there you are with winter soon knocking at your door, and here down under spring is all but here. Tango.

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Carol Gall 27 July 2009

makes me shiver so your words do great 10

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Fay Slimm

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