It started all as friendship,
I've never known will grown so deep;
Wondrin' myself I could hardly speak,
What causes me to smile before I sleep.
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A nice poem with a nice caption. Loved the way the poetess has seen the relationship growing and building. Nice work.
We will make it work how long it may seem, For it's our destiny that lies from within... such a great conviction and courage is beautiful. i pray that your dreams be fulfilled. thank you
Thank you very much Dr. Tony! I really never expect i will receiving such a good comment like yours.. God bless! ! !
So I decided to ask my heart, / [..] / And it answered, 'You're not that smart' / He is that soul that lives from apart. Ho deciso allora di chiedere al mio cuore, / [..] / Che rispose: 'Non sei molto vispa', / Lui è quell'anima che vive in disparte. ''Non sei molto vispa'' is a Tuscan, more than a 'standard Italian', expression ;) ciao
Honestly I don't understand Italian but I am still thankful for your comment.. God bless!
Honestly I don't understand Italian but still I am thankful for your comment.. God bless! ! !
How relationships evolve is nicely presented here. Thanks Analice
Thank you Miss Kelly! This is my first piece and I do appreciate your comment.. God bless!
Very nice, most of the relationships could start from unexpected things, then they start to go deeper as you said, and this is a great thing, I guess. Thanks for sharing your poem.
Thank you also for your very inspiring message... Glad you liked it...
How I love your style of writing it give me hope thanks, when you have time check out my new ones thanks