Sunday, October 6, 2024

Whispers Of The Breeze And Flame Comments

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A breeze once stirred the quiet air,
Gentle whispers, soft and bare,
Beside a flame, it dared to stray,
But drifted far, then lost its way.
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Samir Limbu
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Benii Med 13 October 2024

Well, the third stanza hits different... and that's all poem was all about longing love, something that is very related to many of us, at moment when one cannot tell his feeling for someone he really loves and care. And to see how she is being taken by others. Really touching moment..

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