In dreams I see
those stars
laid bare for me
deserts large
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Remake me again/See thou my purerile heart of Gold! Wonderful! Very touching poem..Only lover can utter this lines..Very sensitive...
REALLY A GOOD POEM HAVING THE MIDAS TOUCH OF IMAGINATION AND IMAGERY
I rea dit in awe. half way through my eyes closed and my heart continued the read. I love it
you write so beautifuly anju that one feels lost in magical words of your poems, you are truly a gifted and great poet and i love reading your works...the whole poem's great but these lines are superb.... 'Dost thou remember those looks, a longing of a mute child. Those gifts when hastily snatched, as diamonds from the caverns of the mines, so were the tears from my eyes that fell to become the stars in that distant sky, when playing hide ad seek in the game of solitary love'....bravo, bravo...many 100's for this beautiful piece..thanks rgds asif
Ectasy reigns here in this most pleasing poetic verse, the imagry is fantastic and it presents a beautifull picture of love shared within.
This poem reflects ecstatic moments, is warm and encircling.
love.love.love..where is the love? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! ! ? ! ? ! ...unhhhhhhhhhhh ohh here is the love, in the poem/....look it described so well and so clearly that you can se the love in the eyes just like the wind...heheheh.but di really it can be feel and really lovable......lots of best wisshes for your poems to touch the sucess......some words are hard to understand but can be searched in the dictionary.heheh
an artwork a beautiful painting! thanks for sharing 10
You portray very beautiful scenes with a lot of descriptive words which involve the sense of sight. I like these lines: so were the tears from my eyes that fell to become the stars in that distant sky, Well done.
Remake me again See thou my puerile heart of gold Sculpt me as thy will With hands like of Michaelangelo Paint me with myriad hues of the rainbow..................wow...words so enchanting...this piece is so stunning...with splendid meaning.... with Michael Angelo's hand...He indeed sculpt you with everything into a woman with beauty and wisdom.... 10++++++++++++
The whisper of a distant love A whispering breeze Sends your lovers words So clear as the winters freeze Amongst those wailing voices Of dillusionary love poets Some near some far Some locked in a jar Those self loving lovers Who's words are strong but unclear Stir in your mind then dissappear But your lovers distant whispers Sparkling lights within your solitude So simple so clear Love is far and near 10 pour vous mon cherie.
i am a helpless child in the wide expanse of your poetic love! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
A verey passionate poem flooding the fragrance of romantic love. She wants him to portrait her figure with the colours of the raibow, needs his fingers through her hair, and her face dipped in the chest...... what a Romantic Poem.
sweet wrds as sweet as the author...cheers.....let's be pretty everyday sweetheart, , , , , , , , naizzzz
Thou dost make love with words, poetry of the heart is heard, thou art a poet.. Andy 10
Bursting with beauty that wispers in the wind with thunderous tones of love... Wow! 10/10