Saturday, July 8, 2017

Whispers In The Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every night I am whispering to the wind
The love I have in you; my heart unbend
By the silence you respond each time
Even touching you seems to be a crime
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Berlyn E.
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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 December 2019

A wonderfully written poem, dear ate Berlyn......10+++

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Dustin Dawin 19 July 2017

Even touching you seems to be a crime..cold to the touch...nice write enjoyed

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Berlyn Estimada 20 July 2017

thank you for reading my poem, : -)

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Hassan Hayati 16 July 2017

I see lots of feeling in this piece.

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Berlyn Estimada 16 July 2017

Yeah that's true. Thank you for reading my poem I do appreciate it.

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Nidhi Agrawal 10 July 2017

Beautiful poem. Portrays longing and heartbreak.

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Berlyn Estimada 15 July 2017

Thank you for reading my poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 08 July 2017

every word is your name, great write.

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Berlyn Estimada 08 July 2017

It's always him even in my silence, His name is the antidote on my pain!

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