Whispers In The Mind Comments

WONDERFUL display and use of words. GREAT write Patricia

Not so much a whisper Peter, more a poem to demand you to read it. Very nice indeed. Sincerely Ernestine

You are right Pete, they start as a whisper in the mind, , , . Nice job.

I love this poem - especially the ending.

I love this poem - especially the ending.

I love this poem - especially the ending.

When I read the title, I knew I had to see this poem. It didn't disappoint me, for of course poems are so powerful and packed, even though so many expect a nursery rhyme or a Hallmark verse. The last two lines left me with cold chills. Raynette

I love the title and the very last line (and all the bits in the middle) . Beautifully expressed. Neat and compact.