Tuesday, August 20, 2013

Whispers In A Dreary Place Comments

Rating: 4.8

Damp drilling spiders
correcting Grammar
and fulfilling their mission.
We are breeze skinned now
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Chris G. Vaillancourt
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Allotey Abossey 23 July 2015

Sounds of the heart... Good

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 30 August 2013

Jesus. Sweet merciful Jesus, what sharply stoned road am I walking upon? a truth there, poet, that God knows well!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 August 2013

The whispers are dreary indeed. Damp drilling spiders, falling trees, stale lemonade, sharply stoned road all creating the surroundings. Nice poem.

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