Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Whispers From A Shadow Comments

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Whispers from a shadow
follow me through the street
shades of light from the moon's glow
follow my weary feet
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Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet
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Muhammad Ali 24 December 2013

dear poet. one day, i hope, you (or i) will see the face of the shadow. i hope that it will be you (or me) . that day you will have next part of this poem for us. i really love your art. peace.

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Marvin Brato 19 September 2013

Like conscience, a shadow keeps whispering! Stay on bright light above you to hide silence the shadow!

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Heather Wilkins 26 May 2013

the shadow goes with us everywhere and it whispers to us. It will always remain. nice write

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Patricia Grantham 14 May 2013

A shadow goes wherever you go. it can't detach itself away from you. It's a silent partner that always lurks in from or behind you. Thanks for sharing a very intriguing poem.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 07 May 2013

A shadow marches to its own drum, yet a slave it becomes. It can not escape, nor can you. Disappearing among the pitch dark night. Only to be found following in the daylight. It's a struggle for it to own itself. Forever attached, whether it be at the hand or feet. On the eye of the horizon it does meet. Excellent Poem.

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Rehana Nazli 02 May 2010

Words that we exchange, prayers and compliments that we give and take, promises that we make, follow us everywhere. I wonder what do your whisper say? thanks for sharing a poignant poem.

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Intan Rianda 27 April 2010

i like it! nice poem! :)

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