Monday, May 8, 2006

Whispers Fade Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

She has a mask to hide behind
No one seeing through her tears
No one hearing through her silence
Throughout the years
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Adeaze Tinkerbelle
COMMENTS
Isaac Mims 16 May 2006

i love your peoms. ^.^

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trisha evensen 12 May 2006

very lovely poem echoing deep sadness

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Patricia Gale 11 May 2006

You have talent that is shown here. Well done, keep writing! Patricia Gale

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Lydia Francese 08 May 2006

I really connected with the line she lives a life of lies. Good read Dallas. -Lydia

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