Whispers... Comments

(continued) ............. .. to MyPoemList .................. keep writing, even if it is NOT poetry. shall i someday see you book(s) in the New York Times list of Best Sellers? or will they be confined to a cellar? ? ? ! ha ha. bri :)

it's basically a fine poem, and escape from containment! but a couple of suggestions, my friend, re these, otherwise very nice ending lines: As life's struggle will emerge ..............[As from life's struggle I'll emerge] brighter, stronger, whole. As the whispers release me from my captures. ..............captors i think. ;) (to be continued) ....

Very nice, the deep person is very complex, so strong yet gentle at the same time, whispers are confirming your freedom. Very nice!