Wednesday, January 6, 2016

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You can't lay it on a slab for me
bold and harsh
I see it in the back of my mind
I hear it when the old story teller speaks
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Melvina Germain
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 January 2016

why are comments not getting posted is there a limitation to commenting i wonder still All are not born so simplistically beautiful minimum make up no perfumes worn eyes natural lips wide open love me if you can now come along my eyes are transfixed into yours I can see myself in you where are the vibes coming from let’s retire into a world now you’ve grown my life is only yours your eyes now I own

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 January 2016

scream not life is merely a dream

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Kelly Kurt 06 January 2016

Very poignant and well written, Melvina. Touching yet sad

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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