Blissful whispers, the ebbing tide,
A sated lover’s sigh.
Scintillating breeze against my cheek,
Teasing me with warm salty breath,
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She understands my troubles and fears, Offers me hopes and dreams. Gazing at her magnificence, I am but a grain of sand, She is my sanctuary, A sacred temple for my thoughts, Without judgement, she comforts, Ever unchanging, ever extraordinary, Nature’s most precious gift – the sea. what a great, sweet and poetic way done whispers.. really its heart feeling poem dont in a very much melodic way written..liked the style you write or compose the words and verses..enjoyed this poem and read few times..well done 10/10
Brilliantly written. Breathtaking in its premise. Without a doubt a 10.
This is how mysterious this site can be! ! All of a sudden, A great poem like this one is revealed.
Vow! you have a great friend there. Lovely flow of thoughts. Well written....10+++
Beautiful and enchanting! With a touch of mystery! You create beauty with imagination and talent. Good job! :) DC