Friday, January 27, 2006

Whispering Breeze Comments

Rating: 4.8

A soft, whispering breeze, stirs the leaves on the trees,
And then suddenly, a gust, lifts the dry settled dust,
Things start moving about, and now there's no doubt,
That a storm's on the way, coming in from the bay.
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Ernestine Northover
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poopoo peepee 25 June 2019

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Marilyn Lott 02 October 2007

A lovely fun style, Ernestine. You have a unique voice that is captivating. Marilyn

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Duncan Wyllie 05 March 2006

To make it through the storm Ernestine, all is possible.Love Duncan

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Chuck Audette 01 February 2006

This is great. Excellent rhymes and flow and word choices. -chuck

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***** ********* 27 January 2006

There is nothing like a cool breeze to to blow away the cobwebs Ernestine! Quiet yet forceful little poem. 10 from likewise Tai

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Hugh Cobb 27 January 2006

I bet you had fun writing this one, Earnestine. The internal rhyme scheme is not unlike a puzzle to work with. It challenges the intellect. Well-crafted, like all of your work. A pleasure to read. Warmly, Hugh

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Rusty Daily 27 January 2006

And this is a soft whispering breeze of a poem. Reminds one of the cycles of nature. Liked the way the rhymes didn't interupt the flow of the poem. Rusty

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Uriah Hamilton 27 January 2006

Lovely fun write, love all the imagery of the storm and the trees.

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Mary Nagy 27 January 2006

I love how this poem actually weathers the storm through Ernestine. I could almost see the rainbow forming.................. Great poem. Sincerely, Mary

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