Wednesday, February 19, 2014

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What do you whisper, wind,
When you wander through the pines?
What traveler’s tale do you spin
To fill their boughs with restless sighs?
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Seamus O' Brian
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Glen Kappy 28 April 2017

well, after reading this one, i'm thinking there's a lyric celt in you, neal. i like this, like what you imagine in it... you may know that hebrew and greek both use the same word in their respective languages for wind and spirit, and this has intrigued me. and, like God, the wind itself is invisible, but its effects are undeniable. you might like my haiku titled wind which rattles trees. -g

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Melissa Tamayo 08 May 2015

Neal? I enjoyed reading this one very much. Great view of the wind.. Great piece

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F J Thomas 04 August 2014

Neal what a beautiful song you have spun. The longing to see everything the wind has; a unique perceptive of capturing the wind. Very nice :)

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Seamus O' Brian

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