Monday, May 15, 2006

Whispered Secrets Of The Unknown Comments

Rating: 0.0

The trees whisper a secret
As I sit here on the grass
The secret is like a beautiful glass vase
But still it shall not last
...
Read full text

Louise Brown
COMMENTS
T Brwn 26 July 2009

that is a beautiful poem, short and true. well done

0 0 Reply
Nicky Turner 07 June 2007

good few typo's typo's: secrete = secret unown = unknown beautiful keep up the work you have real talent, it will be interesting to see what you come up with next.

0 0 Reply
Satan's Sibling 25 June 2006

Short but sweet. And so true. BTW, It's spelt 'Secret.' SGM

0 0 Reply
Louise Brown

Louise Brown

woden hospital canberra
Close
Error Success