Friday, November 2, 2012

Whisper Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Heart and soul love you baby
You ever don't feel my sorrow
Deep Pain forbid eyelids sleep
Shine star fade and shine away
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Vian Sabri
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Edward Kofi Louis 21 June 2016

Bitter battle! ! With the muse of love and pain. Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 18 May 2015

Indeed, love could be a bitter battle for some people - a distress and heartache in the bliss of love. A beautiful love poem, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kurdistan Kurdi 05 November 2012

whisper of love is so nice that i feel it got my heart dear, good

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Kurdistan Kurdi 05 November 2012

this poem is so simple but so nice my dear vian

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Kurdistan Kurdi 05 November 2012

very nice dear vian, whisper of love is faraway nice than the your first poem

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Asif Andalib 03 November 2012

Nice job however my suggestion is try to use metaphors and imagery in your poetry. Moreover go for different forms of poetry it will facilitate your expression of deepest thoughts and feelings

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