Heart and soul love you baby
You ever don't feel my sorrow
Deep Pain forbid eyelids sleep
Shine star fade and shine away
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Indeed, love could be a bitter battle for some people - a distress and heartache in the bliss of love. A beautiful love poem, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
whisper of love is so nice that i feel it got my heart dear, good
very nice dear vian, whisper of love is faraway nice than the your first poem
Nice job however my suggestion is try to use metaphors and imagery in your poetry. Moreover go for different forms of poetry it will facilitate your expression of deepest thoughts and feelings
Bitter battle! ! With the muse of love and pain. Thanks for sharing.