Catching your eye as we stroll through the crowd
I squeeze your hand and whisper...
Watching a movie packed tight with strangers
...
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A whisper, oh so romantic, I love this sweet poem.---Melvina--
Like a gentle perfume fragrance in a room, this poem leaves a beautiful fragrance of love in the air. Delicate, sensual, loving - - just beautiful.
An embracing poem, wakes up the senses, very zesty and alive this one Thankyou again Esther Love Duncan X
ESTHER...FINE CRAFTSMANSHIP HERE...EXRESSIONS OF PASSION SO BEAUTIFULLY DETAILED IN A STELLAR USE OF IMAGERY...YOU ROCK ESTHER...LOVE YOUR FLAIR...'''''''''''''''FRANK
Love the repitition of the whisper and the way you left the last line so open - a romantic write indeed. Warmest wishes, Justine
Esther, The word 'whisper' is such a wonderful example of onomatopoeia in the English language and your delightful poem does it justice. I like the pattern of your verse structure and the risque possibilities of the ending. love, Alison
Beautifully done, with lots of love and the right spiciness of innuendo. A 10 for sure. -chuck
those things seem like secrets, to two people who care about each other. that's really not a secret to everybody, who know you two are real about each other.
I will say this very quietly, this is very sweet and so romantic. Yes indeedy. Love Ernestine XXX
Aaaawwwwwwww! ! Steamy, sweet and totally gorgeous. I've come over all romantic! Hugs Anna xxx
Time they put the bromide back in the water round here! A whole host of horniness and humpin (Not PoemHumpin I stress) going on. Spose yours is romantic at least, but we know what you're thinkin. Danny (10 by the way)
Whisper is a beautiful word. It brings up fragile images of magic and mystery. Excellent poem, Esther. Love, Sandra