Friday, October 13, 2017

Whisper Comments

Rating: 5.0

I stutter and can not remember my name.
Its been long since I heard my coarse voice.
My soul dreads the echo of my heart,
Its rhythemic thumping makes sure I remain deaf.
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Dechen Doma Sherpa
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Cheryl Tutaan 13 October 2017

A poignant indeed...replete with deep emotions...a very beautiful write, Dechen... you can also visit my Shattered. thank you...a huge 10 Cheryl

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2017

Amazing whispers are are shared here. Polite conversations rips my soul apart. Stressed mind does not easily accept joy and ignores loathing silence. Depression is brilliantly expressed in this poem. This is amazing.10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 October 2017

If I am gone before the next dawn you witness, I shall leave a whisper behind, listen to me and answer me, a whisper is all I beg. A beautiful write by the poet, whisper heard from within. Thanks for sharing such a nicely crafted poem.

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