Whisper Comments

Love the poem I felt so much emotion passed in this poem Kwep up the good work

I fall to my knees wanting death a release from the pain and suffering of a wasted life. I scream but all that comes out is a whisper Do you hear it? pain described with deep emotion.. feeling of pain is filled in your words using different analogies..... thank you dear poet. tony

Intensely and deeply emotional, gripping my heart and mind with it's silent cry, feeling the pain so completely filling your words and taking me with it into depths of your poem. Rhythm throughout the poem tends to draw out all the pain and emotion from within and placing it crying into the essence of your soul. An excellent and heartfelt poem, totaling encompassing the frustration and heartache of living in poverty. Amazingly poignant! Thank you for sharing it, RoseAnn

iA very beautiful poem with silent cry. Soul always desires for emancipation because life is full of frustration and delusion..Love your emotions. Keep it up. Thanks for sharing.Full marks.

that is not a poem... that is a very painful message for people around you... a silent voice. i agree with Payal Parade, it is very emotional. and as a novelist and a poet i can say, it has a special melody. it is sad but beautiful from the side of your imagination and the way you show it

such a painful poem a cry from heart....very well put every word express its own emotion... splendid work thank you so much for sharing it with us best wishes, payal

An emotive poem... full of depth... a wonderful write.

sometimes whisper becomes the voice of the spokesperson of oppressed class.Loved this write.thanks for sharing.

Very beautiful, filled with deepest emotions and powerful longing for peace within and light through out. I felt every emotion in this poem and became one with it. Beautiful write! Kasia

This is very deep and powerful, you have touched my heart yet again with your poems! I can so relate to wanting a way out of life, it can hurt so bad, i feel ya. Great poem! ! !

Life is rarely wasted, we all have something to give - good one.

So sad within this very clever write, ... talent shines through.

That is awe inspiring love. It comes across clear but you need to put it in stanza form...breaking it down should be easy enough...but other than that is a great write, not sure how they select your poems could be what they see in how many hits on your actual poem...you can see just how many if you look for one poem and click on stats for that particular poem hope I helped. I think your a brillant poet.

true talent and very deep meaning

now that's deep love it