Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Whisper Comments

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i heard
the whisper of the thunder
and in silenced my dreams
shouted a deafening murmur
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villiamor calventas
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Asif Andalib 20 November 2012

Lovely metaphors. Good poem. I like it

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Marieta Maglas 31 October 2012

The last lines are beautiful......thank you for sharing this poem

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Aung Si 31 October 2012

borne out of mute whispers lost in the roar of deafening silence. Great idea indeed! Keep it up! ! ! !

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villiamor calventas

villiamor calventas

pasaleng, pagudpud, ilocos norte
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