Whispering Love
Did the sweet nothings mean naught to you?
I waited un-satiated, infatuated - by the gate.
I cried unending tears, and breathless race up the mountain top
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Awesome write....the love crazed search for whispering love
whispering echoes in the womb and embrace it in the pool of love
What a beautiful way of whispering a poem out and then to reveal the truth in the last line of it. This is just great. Top marks (10) .
Love hurts and hurts endless, exactly the way it can lift one to the acme of delight! I can hear the wailing of this love sick soul! Beautifully depicted the feverish search of a lover for the lost love! A very sensual write!
Whispering Love Did the sweet kisses linger to wet your hungry lips? Just to quench your thirst? I’m left searching for your fingers tangled in my hair, To trace and cool the burns You left on my half opened lips. this is really beautiful Roopa. magical and so passionate, . you have really experienced love. i read it in your lines. God bless you Roopa