Friday, September 28, 2012

Whisky In Oval Glass Comments

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Oval glass
Like your waistline
Touches my fingers
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Udaya R. Tennakoon
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Poetheart Morgan 03 October 2012

. then you get out of an addiction and falls for another? ? Beautiful Poem

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Sankaran Ayya 29 September 2012

Oval glass Like your waistline Touches my fingers -holding a whiskey glass is like holding a pretty waistline.Both are highly intoxicant Whisky in it Pretty hard Soften with Swing ice cubes -nice lines How about other intoxicant? Lips for cubes? Your poem will tempt even a teetotaler. Nice poem. Best wishes Uday -KAVIN CHARALN

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Udaya R. Tennakoon

Udaya R. Tennakoon

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