Thursday, November 22, 2012

Whiskers On My Chin Comments

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The wind tugs at the whiskers,
That reside on my chin.
Longer now in November,
Than They've ever been.
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Juan Olivarez
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Claudia Krizay 09 December 2012

great poem Juan with a lot of philosophy and a touch of humor- good job- I really enjoyed this one!

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Valerie Dohren 29 November 2012

Yes, leave them where they are Juan. They look just fine, and will also keep your chin warm! !

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Smoky Hoss 22 November 2012

Gray hair (where ever it may reside) is a crown of righteousness, a touch of glory for a long life. Wisdom. Like this poem pardner, good one.

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