Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Whilst Flying. Comments

Rating: 5.0

A moonless night, and in mid-air flight
The pilot dimmed plane's internal light
To see, unseen cosmic sight.
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Fay Slimm
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David Harris 21 November 2009

Fay, I tried to comment on this when you posted it, but PH wouldn't let me which is the reason why you haven't seen me for a couple of days. I felt that I was flying with you on this one. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Bob Gibson 19 November 2009

Time stood still for that bird in flight as shooting stars marveled delight ten seconds of memory were compressed replayed over in a mind so blessed

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Tsira Goge 17 November 2009

To a humbled stillness, and was part Of a much greater power, which startled The pilot's unbelieving heart. ............................. It's surprising poem... As himself the pilot of ' Blackbird ', ...10... Thank you dear Fay Tsira

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Joseph Poewhit 17 November 2009

All that blackness and stars like diamonds

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