Monday, May 25, 2009

While You Were Sleeping Comments

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While you were sleeping I felt your heart beating
While you were sleeping in my head love was repeating
While you were sleeping all I could do was smile
While you were sleeping I watched you for a while
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Shashendra Amalshan 27 July 2009

this is filled with emotions again friend.. nice indeed! ! ! with love shan

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excellent poetry............... nice rhyming.. nice mood.

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