Wednesday, July 22, 2009

While You Were Sleeping Comments

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Last night whilst
you were sleeping
I cried a little.
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Deborah Cromer 25 July 2009

I used to lay there and watch my man sleep. Looking at him sleep and just wondering if he even knew, or had a clue of how much I adored him. That was until I found out what a loser he was. You did a really good job with this. I like the way you display your feelings in story like way almost. You open up with some pretty intense, almost private moments. Nice. DC

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