Sunday, November 5, 2006

While You'Re Sleeping Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are lying there and I am here in a world
I dared not to invite you in.

You are closing your eyes while my eye lids
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catty Alonzo
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 12 November 2006

This I like very much, Cat>>>You capture the reader via fine flecks of pictorials and subtle language that turns glaring, in the end.The difference between a decent poem & a very good one is the Poet's ability not only to take the Reader to the Poem, but to enrapture them within the poem...you have succeeded in doing that, here'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{ F j R }

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