While You Are Alive! Comments

Inner conversation with volleys of questions…you’ve monopolized in melancholy poetry like Keats…this melancholy is true feeling and a poet must portray the trues…no concealment concoction…stay bare and total nude to emotion how hard and melancholy they’re…excellent diction…by the way it is not necessary poets will answer the questions poemed in poetry… thanks sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

A marvelous piece of poetry, very well written with emphsis each line, each sentiment deserves.[ don't you know a solution? , before the poison destroys, your agonies finish you while you are alive.] - a right warning!