Monday, January 20, 2003

While Writing Comments

Rating: 4.8

Someone inside says, "Get busy."
But I've got appointments to keep,
I have an abstemious love of equations calculated quickly
While the tepid day melts into design.
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Noelle Kocot
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Cheryl Tutaan 30 October 2017

tied in knots of comprehension Such a great poem, Noelle...Congrats for being chosen! SweetLyrehc

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Dawn Dusk 30 October 2017

An excellent read. You have written a wonderful poem.

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Susan Williams 30 October 2017

Complex and yet imminently readable. Need to read more of her work to see if this is her typical style... either way I think I like her

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Nudershada Cabanes 30 October 2017

Writing is healing to the soul. We write to express what we cannot say.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 October 2017

Such a great poem, Noelle... congrats for being chosen...10+++*

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 30 October 2017

We each come upon the same poem scribbled in invisible ink Taped to the door of a room In which an austere justice is burning for us. A great write on writing skills and the poetic world within the self. Congratulations on this day. 10++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2017

And that after marching one doozy of a kilometer after another, We each come upon the same poem scribbled in invisible ink Taped to the door of a room In which an austere justice is burning for us... interesting write with nice diction. Beautiful penmanship. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2017

A very fascinating creation with excellent expression.. Enjoyed

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Ashika Murali Acharya 30 October 2017

Someone inside says, Get busy. - Very interesting expression.Well written!

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Savita Tyagi 30 October 2016

Very interesting poem with fascinating expressions. A pattern oriented mind finding poetic beauty in some previous skill. It represents a mature mind opening to a larger consciousness. Thank you for sharing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 30 October 2016

I wholly agree with the comment of Mr. Robert Murray Smith. Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 October 2016

I search for patterns in everything..... Well-written... Congrats for being selected....

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 October 2016

Knots of comprehension. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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