Tuesday, November 18, 2014

While Walking...... Comments

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While walking.....
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Down the day
Down the night
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Salini Nair 21 November 2014

Within don't carry the dead spirit Come out of the graves And live a life of reality........great work

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Amitava Sur 19 November 2014

By putting on a mask or camouflaging a lif can never be happy or successful. A wise message is hidden in this lovely poem with values.

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Valsa George 18 November 2014

Come out of the graves And live a life of reality Be natural A great exhortation to tear off the masks and be natural and original.... Also to leave behind the rotten ways and embrace fresh thoughts and imbibe fresh energy and live life fully! The comparison used here is very apt! A profound write!

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