Wednesday, December 3, 2008

While The City Sleeps Comments

Rating: 5.0

While the city sleeps
I roam the streets
Feeling a sense...
Of contentment and peace
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Dee Daffodil
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Scarlett Treat 03 December 2008

An awesome feat here! You have managed to combine peace and warmth against cold and fear, showing a contrast, a conflict within one person...alone, with the elements and yet against? Great Writing, Miz. Daffy Down Dilly!

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Danny Reynolds 03 December 2008

Bloody Hell Dee. Shades of Charles Bronson? Danny; ¬)

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