Friday, July 12, 2019

While Parting Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've also felt
all windows were watching
all walls were listening,
I'd also felt at that time
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Suman Pokhrel
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Bijay Koirala 09 April 2024

'Do not think I've reached where I am now by slipping like a landslide or evaporating like a cloud. '

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 July 2019

Very impressive write, Suman Pokhrel. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 12 July 2019

A poetic expression depicting firmness of convictions and resolve to trade one's chosen path irrespective of hurdles, obstacles and suspicions paved by the surroundings. Translation is superb and as good as an original. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Suman Pokhrel

Suman Pokhrel

Biratnagar, Nepal
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