Thursday, October 3, 2013

While Out Walking A Winding Road Comments

Rating: 5.0

I looked for you today
In the wooded trails
of twisting braided branches,
where the drying leaves, edges turned up,
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Susan Lacovara
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Anthony Burkett 02 February 2014

Wonderful imagery… very touching... reminiscent of slightly faded memories... as one looks back onto their youth from further down the winding road of life.

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Free Bird 06 November 2013

it is a lovely poem with great emotions.its very difficult to pass from that place where you had memories with a lost person. the poem i wrote was just my imaginations but your poem is fully realistic one :)

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Danny Draper 28 October 2013

A beautiful poem, melodic and reflective with a hint of melancholy, but not self pity.

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Jayne Davies 16 October 2013

A lovely poem! Well done x

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Sekharan Pookkat 03 October 2013

searching eyes will find out matching signs

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

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