Tuesday, November 13, 2012

While My Wife Is In Japan....Again......[personal; Retirement Comments

Rating: 5.0

This beautiful day I sit on patio, .... which my wife may enclose.
I hope I'll enjoy the birds as much, and feel wind when it blows.
A little plane in the distance hums; my wife thinks they're crazy.
I've done most of day's exercises; now I'm being 'lazy'.
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Eugene Levich 15 July 2014

This engaging poem proves again that Bri is quite a guy!

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Elena Sandu 06 December 2012

What a nice day to spend, calm and relative quiet (hahaha the humming plane was funny) . Beautiful, engagingly written, liked it, thank you for share.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 16 November 2012

Interesting narrative of a single day's activity...and you are not a mother. Engaging wit and humor, excellent rhyme and transgressed meter (I do that too) but very delightful poem to read.

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