Thursday, February 26, 2009

While My Kayak Gently Weeps Comments

Rating: 5.0

(INSPIRED BY THE BEATLES SONG 'WHILE MY GUITAR GENTLY
WEEPS)

Shadows of winter, full blast,
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Chuck Audette 30 March 2009

Just searched on 'kayak' and found your poem floating here. Lovely! I'm looking forward to going paddling soon. -chuck

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Stephen Stirk 26 February 2009

Absolutely amazing description and imagery. An extremely well written piece that flows easily, Thank you for posting. I'm new on here Look me up some time Steve

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