While Inside Your Lover Comments

This was interesting, an angle of the topic that you only consider when you're actually there, involved in the moment! Wonderfully written and expressed.

i love how this doesn't read crudely, but easily. wonderful poem <3 10

This is an exhilarating read.... Very creative too... Loved reading this one... not a dull moment at all in this piece... good..10++ cheers shan

Love your creative thoughts process and your unforgettable writing. You seem to do full justice to whatever you choose to write about. As well befits a Knight. (smile)