Tuesday, September 13, 2011

While I Puff Comments

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...while i puff..
..that makes me cough...
...when the smoke from my cigarette billows..
...the space between death and me shallows..
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Rigzin Namgyal
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Shivani Gupta 02 December 2012

awesome..beautiful write..the feeling is so well expressed

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Robert Beck 31 December 2011

I really like your poem Rigzin, but remember Satan lives in that smoke and fire Waiting quietly for the weak to expire ``````````````````````````````````````````````````````

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