Sunday, July 29, 2012

While He Sleeps Comments

Rating: 4.6

While he sleeps
The cricket sounds it's chord's
Outside 'neath our window
Where our lily's are responding
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Susan Lacovara 15 November 2013

Sweetly, there in the silence of his sleep...a tender tranquil expression of love, in it's purity. Quite simply put. Thank you for sharing what so many still search for. PEACE

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Theodora Onken 29 July 2012

Valerie, Thank you so very much for your very kind words. They mean a lot to me. Regards, Theo

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Valerie Dohren 29 July 2012

Very romantic and heartfelt write - good work.

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