Sunday, November 6, 2011

Which Path Will You Pass? Comments

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As i see you grow,
My worries on you is my main blow,
As you start to look soft and ripe,
My fear is on whose advice will build your life?
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Shamba Kaunda
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 28 December 2011

Incridebly...these words should come from an elder not a juvenile...this awesome poem shows your maturity...superb poem man.!

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Dave Walker 06 November 2011

A really good poem. Liked it. Good write. May i invite you to read my poem called, Lilly.

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Great poem brother. well written....

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