As i see you grow,
My worries on you is my main blow,
As you start to look soft and ripe,
My fear is on whose advice will build your life?
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A really good poem. Liked it. Good write. May i invite you to read my poem called, Lilly.
Great poem brother. well written....
Incridebly...these words should come from an elder not a juvenile...this awesome poem shows your maturity...superb poem man.!