Thursday, February 19, 2009

Which One Would You Choose? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Seeing, hearing, smelling,
Tasting and touching.
If you had to select a sense to lose,
Which one would you choose?
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Layla Stone
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Shekhar Joshi 14 May 2009

this is a BRILLIANT POEM. and yes at this time i am unable to chose which i i can afford to lose. but most probabily it should be seeing....i don't know

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Julia Wakeman 19 February 2009

wow. I have no clue which one I would choose. However, I am sure that if I did lose any of them I would instantly wish it was a different one. Great job with this poem. You make your point and drive it home using repitition. This is a question that will be stuck in my head for a long time now. WHICH ONE WOULD I CHOOSE?

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