Friday, October 6, 2006

Which Color Am I? (Know Your Color) Comments

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which color am i lord?
answer me and feel this void
my color comes with so many shades
and make it difficult to choose
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Abha Sharma 24 March 2008

what a way to male your presence eternal....loved reading it...

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 16 October 2007

If we were stripped of our skin and beliefs we'd all b the same. You shouldn't reject your color or let it upset you. Black white, brown, red or blue it doesn't matter. Great poem, it was touching. Keep writing: -)

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Peter A. Crowther 24 October 2006

Nice write. Always be proud of your heritage

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Nimal Dunuhinga 18 October 2006

Excellent! That's the colour of Ebony, Elephant, Soot and more strong things? And I dedicate my poem 'Colour of my dream' to you.

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Joe Breunig 17 October 2006

We should be the color of our (hands') palm; for when they are raised to God, they all look the same. BTW - nice write.

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Prabu ram 10 October 2006

Human minds are colorless. If they will, they can spread true joy to all humanity.

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