Wednesday, November 18, 2009

Which Approach Is Good! Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I think of you, my eyes turn wet,
But, when you think of me, your face turns red,
The tears or the smile,
Which approach is good?
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Prakash Mehra
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Suja Nair 28 November 2010

nice poem, i feel Love and Value goes hand in hand, both come first

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Tesla Blackburn 20 December 2009

luv the fact that most ppl at sum point in their lyf actually do wonder bout which world they belong in. luved the poem.

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Tanchanok Manokam 01 December 2009

Hi... This a fabulous poem. Which approach is good. I confuse and hesitate many time in my life. But final I can decide to choose the one. Fantactic writing.. Nice to know you Pang

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Nivrutti Avhad 29 November 2009

lovely poem indeed nice

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Rajaram Ramachandran 29 November 2009

Your poems are very simple and very much interesting to read. Thanks for sharing.

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Merna Ibrahim 29 November 2009

Ain't this fantastic? ! ! .The poem is marvelous...i like the contrasts ana the repeating of the question...well expressed.Merna

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Joseph Stotz 19 November 2009

P.M. we have to understand that which keeps moving is possibly asking for help with something else in sight or at site. The approach of non approach, to find out from the pain the reality, the illusion of pain, and how it illustrates truth

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Eyan Desir 18 November 2009

Welll expressed......

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Eyan Desir 18 November 2009

Welll expressed......

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Halana Williams 18 November 2009

short sweet and lovely. Very nice! =]

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Rebecca R. 18 November 2009

Great poem! I give you 10 marks. And as for which approach is best, I'd say that the best is to be in a dream world and to be thought of fondly with tears rather than the smile, because it is the truest and most genuine of the two, at least to me...

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Michelle Valdez 18 November 2009

i like this poem.... it kinda seems like what im going thru....=(

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Joseph Poewhit 18 November 2009

Love is just love, it's hard to put values or anything upon it.

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