Saturday, May 18, 2013

Wherever You Go Comments

Rating: 4.5

Spinning a coin
Decide you where to go
Just hold it don't let it tells
Where we should go
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Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 April 2018

We should trust in our souls. Soul tells where should one go. We mustn't feel alone because thousands and thousands of stars at sky are with us in the absence of sun or in the presence of it. An outstanding poem shared amazingly.10

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Mj Lemon 06 January 2018

Life and living without the certainty of a tangible guide....that is faith. Taking a risk and believing that all can and will work out...that is humanity. This is a brilliant poem, Soul.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 November 2016

Always take the truth along with you. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Ramesh Rai 07 July 2013

If you doubt on your heart I'll lay my trust on you For you to believe Wherever you go Never alone, with you Even the sky is still blue And If you never knew Thousands stars still for you The same stars at midnight Still shine you in daylight Hopes around with you beautiful write

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Heather Wilkins 19 June 2013

beautiful write. the last stanza is my favorite. filled with hopew

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Heather Wilkins 19 June 2013

beautiful write. the last stanza is my favorite. filled with hopew

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R.j. Wynn 13 June 2013

spinning my soul is fun!

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Jinal Oswal 12 June 2013

It is beautiful... No one in this world will feel alone if they read this. It has a certain energy which makes us believe in ourselves and your words.. thank you for this brilliant write :)

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Fatima Nusairat 01 June 2013

Unwritten Soul you just written your soul here...I love it.., visit my page..!

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Ken E Hall 01 June 2013

No doubt you've got it the knack of explaining the soul, all heartfelt as I read your poem it seems all written in the stars and I feel better for that and thanks...regards

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Spiritual Seeker 29 May 2013

Trials and tribulations are a test of love and devotion...sweetness will flow at the end of it! Thanks for sharing soul!

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David Wood 25 May 2013

A philosophical look at life, Soul. The stars are always in the sky, sometimes we don't see them but they are there, just like hope is always there.

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Shahzia Batool 23 May 2013

Lucid, poetic, philosophical, showing you in the brooding moments, composed in the galloping beats of a horse' smooth ride! ! ! a beautiful poem by Soul! ! !

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Captain Cur 22 May 2013

I like the analogy that the stars are still there whether we can see them or not. Existence is mainly invisible, we only know what we see and our sight is very limited, but feelings are endless. Loved this poem, Mr. Soul.

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Wahab Abdul 20 May 2013

the beginning is all the grace and touch.. enjoyed the poem..

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Danny Draper 20 May 2013

There is always hope and there is always the obvious and also that present but concealed such is hope and love and trust and friendship. Good concept.

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R.j. Wynn 19 May 2013

Buckle up and let us burn some rubber baby! Woooooooooooooo

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Paul Brookes 19 May 2013

Ah lets go on an adventure and find emerald seas and turquoise skies; dive for pearls in the crystal waters. Let 's travel beyond ourselves to the stars Great poem 10/10 Thanks for sharing BB : O)

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Poetheart Morgan 19 May 2013

A friend as you can be our star. Near or far away, you always bring to us comfort and love. Wherever we go. Kisses Soul. Belíssimo poema!

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Nader Baheri 19 May 2013

fabulous.full of hopes. where ever i am standing, does not matter, the sky is spread for me... where ever i am standing, does not matter, the earth is spread underneath my feet if i poor does not matte, i have a generous heart if i am not beautiful, no matter, i have lots of stars in the sky to share. bravo very nicely written~nb

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