Saturday, March 7, 2015

Wherever You Are, It’s A Land Of Dreams. Comments

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Arose sweetheart, the night is gone,
Like a warming sun she ogles the clay,
And the clay says it’s not enough,
Get up for a hug, it’s your day.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 May 2019

I have come across your poem, I cite the last stanza here: The earth is living due to love n sacrifice, The earth is green with your lovely streams, As a mother, as a sister, as a daughter and friend, Wherever you are, it’s a land of dreams......................WOW! How loveliest, tender and touching you are for us! Thank you so much for this most beautifully worded poetry. God Blesses you myriad times! Amen A 10 n much more

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Savita Tyagi 10 March 2015

'Where ever you are it's a land of dream'. Beautiful and sweet tribute for a woman who gives so much.

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Salini Nair 10 March 2015

The earth is living due to love n sacrifice, The earth is green with your lovely streams, ....lovely write

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Hazel Durham 09 March 2015

A stunning tribute to women with inspired lines that rejoice in the greatness of the female spirit and soul!

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Bisma Mirza 08 March 2015

Vow! A sweet poem...............................................

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