Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Wherever You Are Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wherever you are, hear my call
Not more than a whisper, I dare not speak loud.

There were ages and epochs
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Rani Turton
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Dr.subhendu Kar 25 April 2009

The power of wishing, longing and yearning Surely can cast magical spells.................................time yet all records all rave ups in ages and eons in its achieves the elements yearning, longing and wishing, and the ethereal waves at times precipitates earthly to commemorates the glories past yet unknowingly by mystical spells of soul as embodied in eternity yet unfettering by all consequences of swirling time as when unearthly, and that is the power of adherence of soul what we call assimilation, what a glare of soul by all transparency in transcendence, .............. what amazing thought! ! ! ! ! ! , i do admire,10++++++, thanks for sharing

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Vidi Writes 25 April 2009

Certain we treasure, never to vanish from within A wish so ardent should reach far therin The power of reach is so near Only and only if the heart can hear. The emotion here is so well expressed here Each line displays a true melody of that call. Thank you dear poet.

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Kesav Easwaran 23 April 2009

moving write, Rani...pathos steals out heart...the third stanza lines read great...thanks...10

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Lynda Robson 20 April 2009

A hauntingly beautiful write Rani, touched me. 10 Lynda xx

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Vaibhav Pandey 20 April 2009

it hits you to the core....very expresive....loved it ma'm..10

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Tsira Goge 17 April 2009

Rani, Very sincere and beautiful a poem... 10... / thank you.../ All best, Tsira

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Sandra Martyres 17 April 2009

a very sincere and touching call Ranee...beautifully expressed.

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Stacey Watts 16 April 2009

Very beautifully written piece. So very true. Take Care, Ana

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Joseph Poewhit 15 April 2009

Them tears say so so much

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